Thursday, May 5, 2016

Angel's #100WC

One night as Sally was sitting on the couch with her two dogs, she suddenly heard the front door creak open. As she slowly got up, both  dogs at her feet, she walked up to the door and opened it to get a better view of her front porch. “Hmm. Seems to be nothing here.” But just as Sally closed the front door, a large, dark shadowy figure came up behind her and grabbed her neck and started to choke her. “Please, Please stop.” As Sally said her last words, dropping to the floor. She could only remember seeing Sam, her boyfriend!!!!!

1 comment:

  1. Goodness Angel!
    I think they should break up immediately!
    You built the tension well through the piece. I particularly liked the 'dogs at her feet'.
    I'm going to pop this on the showcase!
    Mrs Skinner (UK)

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